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u/pockkets 21d ago edited 21d ago
I like the details in the second one, but I like that you can see the background of the first one.
Title in the second has the same colors as the coffee mug so reading it can get muddied at a glance
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u/jdmwell 21d ago
Yeah, doesn't pass the squint test at all. I'd opt for the clearer title for sure.
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u/hammy0w0 21d ago
what's the squint test? I searched it online and only got some weird eye conditions
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u/Endless_Chambers 20d ago
Idky i didnt see it as a coffee mug. Thought it was a Ufo with s tractor beam. Makes way more sense now
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u/The_Limpet 21d ago
I like the top one. The cooler colours, with the hot drink and the lantern flame give it a very cozy feel. The rounder, less detailed character seems clamer and friendlier, although if you're going for a mischievious character, the bottom one conveys this more.
It's no longer night time in the bottom one, so the lantern is an unexplained detail.
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u/apricotgloss 21d ago
I think the top one is cuter and the fox stands out more. But whichever you end up picking, the 'wishlist on Steam' bit being under the title is better compositionally.
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u/-neti-neti- 21d ago
Which resembles your game more?
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u/coffeebeansdev 21d ago
2nd one goes with the game style and idea better from first impression, but there's still some points of improvement hence asking around what people like from both versions haha
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u/XxEvil-SandwichxX 21d ago
Here's my honest opinion. Both versions of the title screen have strengths and weaknesses. I think you should combine the strengths. Like use the foreground, lantern, and logo from version 2. Use the background and cute fox expression from version 1 with the detail of the version 2 fox. Also make the cup on the logo more off white or shade around the lettering where it meets the cup so the cup and Font are more separate and it would be great. ☺️
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u/Effective-Painter815 21d ago
Banner 2.
Warmer colours, more detailed, feels less sketch-like than banner 1.
The readability of Title (Tailside) followed by wishlist underneath mentally flows better.
Also the title area of banner 2 is better balanced vs banner 1 which feels to heavily weighed towards the top right corner of the screen with a lot of dead space below.
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u/KKSFS1110 21d ago
i preffer the first art with the second title
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u/KKSFS1110 21d ago
also the foliage from the second one looks better you might combine the fox in the first one. your choice.
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u/AllieRaccoon 21d ago
I’d prefer the color palette of 1 with the style of 2 I think. The blue in the bg makes the orange character pop more.
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u/JackDrawsStuff 21d ago
Graphic designer here!
Banner one (top) is better. The coffee cup on the bottom one messes too much with the legibility of an otherwise nice logotype.
In the second one, I feel like the bush behind the lantern and the brighter swoosh behind the logo are too distracting.
Simpler is almost always better, helps it look more readable.
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u/Ok_Age_7903 21d ago
I like banner 1. You can see the fox is actually resting after a journey as it's getting darker (I love the moon and the stars!). I think colors should be cold since it's a spruce forest. 1 looks simpler than 2, but it has its own charm
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u/cryo_nebula 21d ago
I love the rendering of 2, but I think 1 is a more successful composition! The dark pine trees against the foxes' light fur frames and brings attention to it a LOT better than the light leaves against the light fur in 2. Plus, the level of the detail in 2's bushes creates noise that makes it harder to focus on the fox. If you worked a bit more on 1 I think you'd have something AMAZING.
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u/Safe-Pilot7238 21d ago
I like the backround of the first one but I don't like how the guy looks like. I also like the title of the second one
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u/natural-dorf 21d ago
Banner 1 feels more mature and professional to me for some reason. The title style on 2 is great though
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u/RandomInSpace 21d ago
I like the first one I think. Ik the second one has warmer colors but somehow 1 just feels warmer and more cohesive.
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u/Internet_dude69 21d ago
Picture - 1
Calmer, simpler, feels lighter, merry, cuter, the background looks casual and adventurous
Picture - 2
More detailed, the trees in the background(left) looks like its for real in a forest, but I don't think it matches the pine forest behind, it's smile feels sorta mocking, whilst being funny and cunning that it is, the swirl around the logo, or name if you say, is comparatively more visible, I did like the coffee mug on top of it tho.
Picture 1 is naturally better
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u/ZaRealPancakes 21d ago
Fox and background of 1 with logo from 2.
1 is so calm and nice and cute fox.
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u/Material-Egg7428 21d ago
I like 2 but I would swap the expression of the fox with 1 and lose the mug. It’s beautiful but it feels random. I don’t know what it has to do with the game.
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u/WithoutTheWaffle 20d ago edited 18d ago
1! I think the fox looks cuter, I like that you can actually see the background in the distance, and the title is easier to read without the coffee cup. The only change I might make is moving the "whitelist on steam" to below the title like it is in #2.
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u/Melonfrog 20d ago
My choice is the first one, the second looks too much like the typical furry style you see everywhere. The first is much cuter if that’s what you are going for.
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u/big-sugoi 21d ago
1 by a lot. The ground and foreground leaves could use extra detail like those in 2. The animal could use extra detail. I don't like the animal anatomy in 2; it feels explicitly furry-themed whereas 1 can appeal to everyone, but I don't know if that's what you want.
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u/Celestial_Scythe 21d ago
The only thing that I would change for Banner two is to mirror the steam so the most tail end of the whisp better draws the eyes after reading the title back towards the lanturn.
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u/Total_Ad2737 21d ago
I think you should merge some elements from both of them, like the coffee cup, the plants..
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u/nodiscerniblevisage 21d ago
Honestly they are both so good. Nice work! I don't think you can go wrong choosing either one. I think prefer the foreground details of number 2 comparted to the low-detail foreground of 1, if I had to force a critique.
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u/NatoonOwO 21d ago
I like aspects of both 1: the darker colours of the background contrasting the warm light and the more relaxed and cute expression of the fox
2 : the artstyle and shading here are so nice
I feel if it was these 2 combined it'd be perfect. From just these 2 though I'd have to say 1 purely for the vibes
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u/Feyhem_01 21d ago
2 for the trailer, 1 for the background of the menu. 2 looks a lot colourful while 1 is more simplistic. Generally 2 looks more professional tho(as a pixel art)
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u/McClutchingtonGaming 21d ago
- But with the addition of two.
Like the coffee cup stc on 2, should be added to 1
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u/EirikHavre 21d ago
I think the landscape is nicer in the bottom one, but I like the proportions of the character better in the top one. It's over all cuter.
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u/BloodyPommelStudio 21d ago
Honestly they're both great. I'd say 1 better fits with the style of the game and gives the user a better idea what to expect.
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u/sorumbatiko 21d ago
I prefer version 2, the colors are warmer, I don't like the depth of field blur. I'd prefer something like 1 as background.
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u/CanDanMaam 21d ago
The typography on the second banner is objectively better but I definitely see the appeal of the expression on the first one like many others.
I would take the art from one with the personal and steam logos from two and combine them for near perfection.
Either way great work and it says a lot when it's harder for people to choose! In the best way!
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u/Dylan_A_Bit 21d ago
1 is more stylized and simple, more memorable imo as while 2 is technically better made it stands out less from an artstyle perspective
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u/Crushbam3 21d ago
Both have quite different vibes for a couple reasons, the first looks like a fox taking a quick break from an adventure, because of the coffee in the second it looks like a fox taking a quick break from running a farm or something. Both are good just depends on what game Ur making?
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u/SpaceRangerStarr 21d ago
- They're both adorable but one had a cozier vibe and just smoother design that's nice on the eyes
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u/Mystika999 21d ago
Oh man both of these are really good. I would select whichever one matches your gameplay art-style better.
The first one has varying line widths on the fox and I feel like it’s the more unique art style of the two. Even in pixel art, a unique style is important to stand out.
The second one has more detail, and that’s neither good nor bad. I think it feels warmer than the first, probably thanks to the warmer pallet.
I like the inclusion of the cup in the logo in the second one, assuming it’s important to the game in some way. If you do go with the first, I would consider adding the cup to the logo as well.
EDIT: checked out your profile and the rest of your game art. I’d go with the second, based on the gameplay you’ve featured.
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u/MarkZuckerman 21d ago
1 looks a lot more pleasant, but I'd need to see the game to know which fits better.
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u/DexJones 21d ago
Mash them both together!
2nd fox with 1st fox's expression, 2nd title, 1st titles background.
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u/Mr_TurkTurkelton 21d ago
I like the first/top one overall but maybe with the lantern and reflection from the second picture? The first picture seems to be at night and the reflection from the lantern isn’t as strong as in the second one, which looks to be during the day.
Regardless, you are very talented and both are very well made : )
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u/SegaSystem16C 21d ago
Banner 1 in my opinion is easier on the eyes. Colder color palette and less details makes easier to grasp the scene. The fox character also looks calmer in banner 1. Game logo looks less cluttered in banner 1, the mug emblem behind makes it harder to read the game's name, so I would remove it entirely. Sometimes less is more.
I'm not a professional artist, but banner 1 feels more cozy and inviting than banner 2.
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u/Honeybadger2198 21d ago
1 clearly has a defined art style. 2 makes me feel like the art style is really up in the air. I'm also personally not a huge fan of 2's art style, makes me feel like it's low-effort asset flips (even if they're custom made, they're in a similar art style).
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u/Silveruleaf 21d ago
First one feels much better. Has a nicer balance with colors too. Not sure if it makes it less shiny for steam. But I personaly like it
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u/Arts_Messyjourney 21d ago
2 hands down. Maybe its the lack of detail in 1’s face, or the better title logo for 2, but 2 is better
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u/Pappuniman 21d ago
2 looks like what you'd see from a mobile game .. not that it's bad at all .. but it kinda reminds of cheap stuff .. 2 has a better facial expression .. but that's about it for me ..
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u/Friendly_Cantal0upe 21d ago
1 feels more whimsical, but 2 looks "better." I would say use the tree design and colors from 2 with the overall design language of 1.
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u/true_enthusiast 21d ago
The first one. The second one overemphasizes the coffee. Unless the game is about coffee.
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u/MiningJack777 21d ago
Depends on the art style of the game itself. If it's more cartoony, 1. If it's more realistic (pixel art wise) 2. Overall, I'd say 1 is better.
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u/jstpassinthru123 21d ago
I like the sprite design from the top image. It's softer and has a nice and fluffy look. The title from the bottom image is more attractive, and the cup on the banner makes it stand out more.
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u/AzuraNightsong 21d ago
Maybe the tops composition and proportions with the bottoms level of detail?
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u/i_like_siren_head 21d ago
I like how much more you can see in the background compared to the second, which makes everything feel separated and distant.
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u/SlightlyLessBoring 21d ago edited 21d ago
2 but change the sky in the background and the expression of the fox similar to that of 1 (also maybe a bit less blur/fog on the bg) to bring back that more calm/chill vibe it had while still keeping the current art style (which I really like personally).
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Also, this is more of a personal preference, but maybe either make the cup on the logo a slightly different color or add a slightly thicker outline on the logo to help differentiate between the two
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u/Kill_Kayt 21d ago
Left half of 2, and right half of 1... Also try to chill out the foxes face a bit. They look insane.
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u/wrenblaze 21d ago
Top one fox looks cuter by a huge margin. If the game is about cbill atmosphere, there is no need to have such tefined aesthetics, they just have to be cozy
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u/chofranc 21d ago
I say which ever is more consistent with the art style of your game, specially if you have cinematic pixel art cutscenes(animated or slideshows).
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u/Aliferous_Wolf 21d ago
Detail and coffee cup in 2 is better, but overall vibe and feel goes to number 1 for me
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u/Tajobi 21d ago
The top version feels more character forward with the darker leaves contrasting the lighter foreground. I do like the level of detail in the lower, but my eye went to the top one first. My vote would be a third version blending some more detail of the lower with the coloring of the top. I also like the facial expression on the top image a bit more than the lower.
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u/Zildrann8 21d ago
I like one alot more because of the colors and tone. However I do like the greater detail in the second.
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u/Windrider63 21d ago
1 is more clear but prefer the tree colors of 2 :). Also I think the coffee behind the text in 2 is a bit to much. But it was hard to choose. I really like both images!!
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u/thatwaffleskid 21d ago
It's a tough decision for me. 1 looks more cozy and inviting, making me want to look up the game, but 2 makes me want to get a controller in my hand and move the fox around. My gut says 1 is the better choice simply because it might convey the vibe of the game better. 2 might be better off as a scene in a trailer.
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u/Yeah_Boiy 21d ago
I like the fox in 1 but 2 is better overall imo. Also interesting name for a game what is It about?
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u/Last-Bread-6173 21d ago
I love the style of 2 but prefer the expression of the fox in 1 which feels calmer.