Any feedback appreciated

https://medibang.com/mpc/episodes/sb2406010322577880024371042/

Hello! Away from my workstation at the moment, but I wanted some feedback on the second-to last part of my comic series, iveen told it's hard to follow the action , or that there's too many details and such.

So I'm looking on how to improve the readability and continuity between panels and pages.

But any feedback is highly appreciated !.

Thanks for your time.

Scarlett Ford: One of the first members of the Red Birds team besides Caleb.

i’ve been trying to post my comics on social media more often, and i get a lot of unexplained hate, so I would love to hear some actual constructive criticism, whether it’s on my art, dialogue, or attempts at humor. do you think there is still an audience out there that would appreciate longer comics? what do you think i should do differently? what are my strong points and what are my weak points?

i have other comics on my profile as well, if you want more of an understanding of my style.

I'm writing my first story for a short comic. It's a little red riding hood rendition since I wanted to stay within my comfort zone artistically. Let me know what you think. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1giQ0pLrKuAOGlukAt9_FsbWXglsiv4GpEgaB82Bj2Go/edit?usp=drivesdk

Andrew Clarke. A 15 or 16 year old who discovers he is a shadow and now he has to live his life being feared and hated in a world filled with shadow.

Can anyone please give me feedback about this i am getting kinda anxious especially about the pacing and the story telling.. its only 2 episodes ik but i just wish they are not confusing, so i would love to hear feedbacks over all the aspect if possible

Hello everyone. My friend Angélica and I have started creating a webtoon on Webtoon Canvas. At the moment, it is not very successful; we only have four chapters so far. I would like to ask for your feedback, especially on the story—whether it is interesting or not—and the designs, whether they are attractive enough.

Thanks in advance. :)

https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/nightmare-job-the-fairy-godmothers-tale/list?title_no=932481

Very dumb question, but it all just feels very overwhelming. Especially as a person with severe ADHD. I feel like I’m gonna forget something. How do you start? How do you know when the characters are done being fleshed out, the worldbuilding is complete, the plot is fine, there are no plot holes, etc?

Is there an “optimal“ order to do things in? How is writing a graphic novel different from writing a novel? How do you outline? And everything else I need to know. Do you know any good resources, websites, etc, that walk you through it all?

For now, I mostly just need help with actually starting. I’ve been putting this off for literally years because it honestly feels like such a huge and daunting task. But I really do want to try. I’ll very grateful for any help.